Jimmy and Milly the Spirit

Writing:  Working so hard on his farm. Jimmy felt a little sweat come down his face. “Are you alright out there”  shouted his wife margaret. “Yes my dear” replied Jimmy. So he carried on with his job. Looking over at the other side of his farm Jimmy could see this spirit. This spirit use to live in Jimmy`s old house. Her name was Milly. She passed away at the age of 79.

Milly loved her farm. She lived with her husband Greg and her daughter Lilly`

Here is my Rubric

Farming

Where could a farm be ?                                                What is a good time to farm ?

Why do cows it down when it rains ?                             How do we know when to feed the animals ?

Why are animals so important ?