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Goldilocks and the three beras

Once upon a time there lived a bear family. In their family there was a large papa bear, a middle sized mother bear and last but not least a little baby bear. Large papa bear is polite to his neighbours and mother bear teaches her neighbours how to make new recapiecies and baby bear is just a bully at school. He is a naughty naughty bear. When it was the afternoon mother bear was making a delicious pudding for her and baby bear and papa bear. It was too hot so they decided to let it cool down and see the beavers family's new baby. When they had lifted a little girl called goldilocks was picking flowers outside of the bears family’s cottage. She said in her head, “what an ugly cottage the bear family has”. She peeked inside and saw the pudding on the kitchen table. The pudding had cooled down so goldilocks tasted everyone of the bear family’s pudding. She tasted  papa bears but it was too large for her so she moved on to mother bears but it was also a little big so she tried baby bears and it was just right.

She also tried their chairs but it was like the pudding but she had broken baby bear's chair.

After that she had followed asleep on baby bear bed. When the bear family had arrived at their cottage they saw the mess that goldilocks had made. They went up stairs and saw her sleeping but when she woke up she had run off but baby bear said, “It’s alright I forgive you for the mess you made”. So  goldilocks and the bear family lived happily ever after. The End.

The moral of the story was to forgive people who does the wrong things and to not break into there stuff.

The boy who cried wolf

Once upon a time there once live a shepherd that didn`t like his job. All day he will sit down on a chair looking out to his father's sheep and feeling the fresh air blowing into his face. This sheperd would be play with his friends, running and making boyish mischief. While they were working he said to his father“ Can`t the sheep look after themselves, after all they know how to bleat and munch up grass.

But his father said it was very important work to do. But most importantly he has to keep his eyes peeled for the wolf, in case he came sneaking into the fields and grabbed one of the spring lambs. So all day and night the shepherd will look out into the fields for the wolf. So that means he doesn't have any of his sleep.  

So then the next day the shepherd wanted to trick all the villagers. So he got up at 2pm at night  and ran as fast as he could into the village shouting out at the top of his voice “ Wolf ! Wolf WOOOOOOOOOOLF ! So  all the villages woke up and grabbed sticks, rolling pins and pitchforks and came running into the fields. “ Where is it.” said one of the villages. So the shepherd said “ I was just joking.” So all the villages went home.   

So then the next day the shepherd woke up at 2pm and cried out “ Wolf Wolf WOOOOOOOOOOOLF. So all of the villagers can out with some rolling pins and pitchforks. “ Where is, Where is the wolf, Don`t lie” said the villagers. Then the shepherd said “ I was joking again.”

So then the next day the shepherd said to all the villagers “ Wolf, Wolf, WOOOOOOOOOOLF.” But then no villagers came. But when the shepherd looking  into the fields.The sheep dog was barking and the sheep where going crazy. There was really the wolf. So he yelled out “ HELP, HELP, HELP” The sheep are going to get eaten from the wolf. But still no one came.

The Moral of the story is: Never lies once or twice.

The hare and the Tortoise

The Hare and the Tortoise

Paragraph 1: Retell and summarise an Aesop Fable of your choice

The Hare was once boasting of his speed before the other animals. “I have never yet been beaten” he said. I challenge anyone here to race with me.  The Tortoise said quietly, “I accept your challenge.” “That is a good joke,” said the Hare; “I could dance round you all the way. “ Keep your boasting till you've won,” answered the Tortoise. “Shall we race?"”  Of course” said the hair. So a course was fixed and a start was made. The Hare darted almost out of sight at once, but soon stopped and, to show his contempt for the Tortoise. The hare laid down to have a nap. The Tortoise plodded on and plodded on, and when the Hare woke up from his nap, he saw the Tortoise just near the finish line. So the hare ran as fast as he could. But then the tortoise did not  make it  . Then the Tortoise said “Slow but steady progress wins the race”

Paragraph 2: Explain the morale of the fable.

The moral of the story is: If you are faster than someone. It doesn't mean you take a rest by a tree.

Paragraph 3: How does the morale apply to your life? What have you learnt?

Sometimes people will think there faster than you. Sometimes you can beat them in a race.

The Sheep's Clothing

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Once upon a time on a hillside, there once lived a wolf that was fat and was always hungry for meat. He lived in a  forest on the hillside. Every morning and night he would try his hardest to get a sheep. But all his plans failed.   

One day he found a sheepskin behind a tree. So he put the sheepskin on and thought of a plan. He said to himself “ What about putting on the sheepskin to disguise myself”. So he disguised himself and went into the pen.     

The wolf said to himself “ I bet nobody will know I am here”. When the wolf was in the pen he was so thrilled to be having sheep for supper. The One day he found a sheepskin behind a tree. So he put the sheepskin on and thought of a plan. He said to himself “ What about putting on the sheepskin to disguise myself”. He was go thirlled stomach went rumble, rumble.

When the sun started to go down the shepherd wanted to have sheep for his supper too.  So he went to his pen and got the fattest sheep of them all. He chosed the wolf. He took him by his hook and took him home for his wife to roast. But when he laid the sheep on the  table the shepherd noticed it was a wolf. The shepherd was terrified but still happy because none of his sheep would get eaten. 

The Moral of the story is to never pretend to be something you are not.

My brother and len brown the mayor

On Wednesday the Mayor Len Brown came to school. We performed for him at school with alot of people. When we were finish my big brother Toko took at picture with Len Brown.