My Narrative Story at the beach

Walking with my family we were going to Pt England Reserve to  have a swim and picnic. Dancing to the beach I said happily“ I can`t  wait to get there mum” When we got there I was excited. I waited for mum to give my togs. Off I went running to the toilets to get charge.


Running towards the water I saw my brother Toko who did a big boom and made me get wet it was fun. I jumped in and did a boom. I did it over and over again. Mum said “Come and have some lunch now”. So I went to have some lunch.


After I was eating I went to go have fun. When I did a boom my tummy felt sore. I said sadly to mum “ I have a sore tummy. Mum said “ You have a sore stomach because when you eat at the beach and then go for a swim you feel sick, that`s why you have to wait for a little while then go and have fun.”

Then we went back home because I had a sore stomach. My brothers and sisters were crying even my big brothers I said “ Sorry for doing that”