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Thursday, 3 December 2015

A day something went missing

Waiting for my younger sister to wake up in the hospital. I wanted to take my baby brother down to the park to play. Waiting for him to put his shoes on, my mum was telling me to watch out for him. Exiting  the door my mum said “Bye”
we replied “Goodbye.”

Walking over to the stairs, my baby brother stop and looked at me.
“ What's wrong? “ I asked.
“ I don't want to go down the stairs I want to go on the elevator.” he said.
So we walked over and pressed the button. While we were in the elevator I was telling him to stay by me and don't wander off.

When we got there we walked over to the park. “ Weeeeeeee!!!” He said when he was going down the slide. While I i was sitting there he came up to me and said I want to go back now. So we walked up the stairs and went to the elevator. When we were about to go, he said “My jacket is at the park.”
So I said to him “Sit here and wait for me.”
So he did.

Running down to the park I could see the elevator go up. So I was wondering who was one it. So I ran up the stairs and saw that my baby brother wasn't there .  So I stood there in shock. I pressed the button and waited for the elevator to come down. Once it came down I saw that he wasn't in there .  So I freaked out.

So I stood there in silence. While I was standing there I saw the elevator come down and I saw a women come down. I asked her “ Have you seen a little boy”
she said “No sorry”
So I jumped on the elevator and went to the 6th floor. Walking over to my little sister ward. I saw something move in the corner of my eye. So I looked back. I walked into this art room and saw that my brother was in their drawing with another little boy.

So I walked over to him and asked if he wanted to go see your sister and he said yes. So I grabbed his hand and we walked of. When we entered my mum asked me if everything was alright and I said no. Then I told her everything.

After all that talking my little sister finally woke up. “ What a day!!” I said to myself.

Thursday, 5 November 2015

Volleyball

“ Let go Pt England” I heard someone yell. Waiting on the volleyball court for the game to start. I had a really big feeling that we were going to win. Standing in the front row. I heard the siren go off. “ All girl teams please start when the whistle blows.

SMACK!! Went the ball. As I saw the ball go over my head. I was thinking to myself “ If it comes to me should I hit it or not. Standing there with my hand shaking I knew that the ball was coming my way. So I put my hands together and hit it. “ Whew” I said to myself.

Waiting for the ball to come my way. I heard one of the girls say “ Seattle” So she hit it up and then someone else hit it. I stood in shock. Watching the ball go high up in the air. I knew it wasn't going go over. So I quickly jumped up and spiked it over. “ Yay” said the team. Waiting for the second whistle to go for swap over. I was jogging on the spot. “ Let’s go Pt England. You can do this”  said someone the sideline.sideline. Wooooooooo!! went the whistle.

“Swap over” said the referee. While we were swapping over our coach Timmy was telling us to us the dig when their spike it. So the whistle blew. I could see everyone getting nervous because we were losing by
2 point. “ We can do this girl” said Timmy. Standing there in our ready position. I had a really big feeling that we can do this. SMACK!! Went the ball.

Once I let go of the ball I saw that the girls on the other team. Weren't gonna hit. So we got on point. The I did it again and their didn't get. So I jumping around happy because we were betting them. As I was jumping around I saw that the ball was coming my way. So I got ready. As I smacked the ball I saw that the referee was just about to blow her whistle. So I quickly went back into my piston.

Waiting for the ball to come over. I was telling the girls that we were gonna win. So we got ready. As the ball flew over our heads. I had a feeling that no one was gonna hit it. So I ran over to it and just made it. Then the ball went over and then someone smack high. So I ran up to the ball and spiked it. WOOOOOO!! Went the whistle.

“ Yay we won”  I shouted. Feeling so cocky. I went to do our cheers. Walking over to our bags. I was jumping up and down. “ Yay you girls were awesome” said Timmy.

Wednesday, 27 May 2015

Puawai Smart Values

Today at school Miss Kyla came in to class to talk about the 3ps. We had to write down some feedback on what we say and do on-line. 

Monday, 25 May 2015

Puawai Future Aspiration

Today at school 3 special visitors came to our school to talk about their Future Aspiration. What is Future Aspiration? Well Future Aspiration means looking into the Future and aiming for you goal in life. In your life you have to strive to succeeded.

Our 3 special visitors were Marcus Winter, Louis Gordon-Latty and Andrew Patterson. Marcus Winter “ The Sandman”, Louis Gordon-Latty “ Glory League” and Andrew Patterson “ The Speaker.

The first presenter was Marcus Winter. Marcus Winter is a sand artist. When he was in primary he was a painstakingly (very slow writer) writer. When he was in primary he was in the extension class. He thought that he was one of the brainiest in his school. But when he found that extension is for all the dumb people.

Our final presenter was Louis Gordon-Latty. Louis Gordon-Latty is a man who loves to play basketball even when he was 5 years old. He told us about an invention he made up that involves an iPad. This invention was made to record people while they're playing basketball. How it works, well it works when the judges press a button then the iPad starts recording, and it stops when the judges press another button and then the iPad sends an email to everyone who was playing basketball.

The speaker was Andrew Patterson. Andrew Patterson talked about quotes. One of the quotes are “ Do more of what makes you awesome” and “ You don't remember what people said, you don't remember what they did BUT you do remember how they made you fell” I enjoyed listening to them all.


Tuesday, 3 February 2015

Maths

Profile Update

Kia Ora! My name is Te Puawaitanga and I am 12 years old. I am a year 8 student at Pt England School. I am Maori and Cook Island.  My teacher this year is Mrs Moala and I am in Room 4.  I enjoy playing netball, playing with my friends and visiting my family's.  The best thing about this year is that I am a year 8, but the sad thing is that this is my last year at Pt England school. So that means I have to pick up the pace and finish school happy and proud.  

Monday, 21 April 2014

My Duffy Book

Have you read the book Kyla. Witch was written by Frances Cherry. This Book is a really good book to read. I will tell you about the book. Kyla's world is centred around her beloved grandmother, Nora, safe in the knowledge that she knows who she is and where she belongs. But now Nora has died, and Kyla belongs nowhere. Taken away to live with her auntie, Caroline, suddenly Kyla`s World is filled of doubt and questions.

Kyla hates Caroline, hates her new school and hates everything. To make herself feel important, she make up stories about her life, until there are just to many lies.......

Thursday, 17 April 2014

Happy Easter Everyone

Happy Easter to everyone in New Zealand and God bless you all, and make sure you look out for the eater bunny.


Wednesday, 9 April 2014

Fiafia Rehearsal 2014


Standing beside the stage I was nervous, shy and hot. So I sat down and watched Mr Barks group. As I heard Isara say “ Lets give it up for Pacific Contemporary girls” I started to shake. When I got up on the stage I felt very nervous but at the same time I felt very happy. Performing so hard I came of the stage and my mum said “ You perform very well”

Tuesday, 18 February 2014

My Goals 2014





My Personal Goals - 2014  Date : Wednesday, 5th  February

1.My achievement I was most proud of  last year  in the classroom was maths
because I move from the middle and nearly to the top.
2.The thing I was most proud of last year outside of the classroom was netball because a was a Goal shot and I could get shot from far.
3.In reading my learning goal is to read more books and try to get to the level I have to get two.
4.To achieve this goal I need to read more and more book at school and at home.
5.In writing  my goal is to write more effective paragraph.  
To achieve this goal I need to use more juicy and vocabulary words.  
6.In Maths my goal is to learn to do my division, timetable and learn more maths strategies.   
7.The learning area I think I need to improve in most is writing. Because on my report writing was really low and I only move a little bit.
8.In my learning my goal this term is to  show the teacher where I am on my nextbook. So that means I have to be in the  right place at the right time.
9.My goal for this year around the classroom is to have the right attitude when I enter the classroom and to Stop Look and Listen when the teacher tells us to.
10.My goal for this year around the school is to look after the little kids at school and help everyone at school.
11.My parents goal for me this Term is to focus on my work . Get in to all the sports team and try to be a prefect for 2015.

Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Add detail to a sentence

 W.A.L.T: Add detail to a sentence
                                           Use more interesting vocab



In the morning I was very excited because it was the very first day of school. So I dragged myself out of bed and ran straight to the bathroom to get changed and have a wash.

Tuesday, 17 December 2013

The last days of school ..............

At school things are changing because there are kids moving to different classes. This year room 16, 17 and 18 are moving to the new classes on the filed. Some of the year 8 and 7s are helping there teacher to move there stuff to they new classes.

Some classes are playing outside because there class is going to have new people in there. I hope that next year I will be in one of the classes on the field. I can`t wait to see what 2014 at school will look like.

My Netbookl nReflection 2013

I have learned to use my docs, netbook and even knew how to re imagine my own netbook.. I hope next year I will learn how to make better progress in maths, reading and writing.
In the past term I have learn to use Minecraft, solve decimals and solved multiplication and division problems all by myself. I hope that next year I will learn more from my teacher and online.



This year I learn a lot from my friends like our prizegiving dance, learning new strategies and playing new game together. I hope next we
will all learn more things next year. I love learning from my family as well. When I am stuck on my work or I am angry my family always help me try and try harder.

This year I taught some year 6 and 5s how to use there chromebook and netbook.. I taught some kids to be respect and co-operate together. This year i have learn a lot of the internet. This year I have learn to use the tamaki college library.   

Monday, 2 December 2013

Adventure Time

 Here is a little presentation about Adventure Time. I hope you enioy.

Thursday, 28 November 2013

Camp Bentzon

Here is a presentation about Camp Bentzon

Thursday, 24 October 2013

Jimmy and Milly the Spirit





Writing:  Working so hard on his farm. Jimmy felt a little sweat come down his face. “Are you alright out there”  shouted his wife margaret. “Yes my dear” replied Jimmy. So he carried on with his job. Looking over at the other side of his farm Jimmy could see this spirit. This spirit use to live in Jimmy`s old house. Her name was Milly. She passed away at the age of 79.
Milly loved her farm. She lived with her husband Greg and her daughter Lilly`


Here is my Rubric


Monday, 14 October 2013

Farming

Where could a farm be ?                                                What is a good time to farm ?

Why do cows it down when it rains ?                             How do we know when to feed the animals ?

Why are animals so important ?

Tuesday, 20 August 2013

Goldilocks and the three beras

Once upon a time there lived a bear family. In their family there was a large papa bear, a middle sized mother bear and last but not least a little baby bear. Large papa bear is polite to his neighbours and mother bear teaches her neighbours how to make new recapiecies and baby bear is just a bully at school. He is a naughty naughty bear. When it was the afternoon mother bear was making a delicious pudding for her and baby bear and papa bear. It was too hot so they decided to let it cool down and see the beavers family's new baby. When they had lifted a little girl called goldilocks was picking flowers outside of the bears family’s cottage. She said in her head, “what an ugly cottage the bear family has”. She peeked inside and saw the pudding on the kitchen table. The pudding had cooled down so goldilocks tasted everyone of the bear family’s pudding. She tasted  papa bears but it was too large for her so she moved on to mother bears but it was also a little big so she tried baby bears and it was just right.
She also tried their chairs but it was like the pudding but she had broken baby bear's chair.
After that she had followed asleep on baby bear bed. When the bear family had arrived at their cottage they saw the mess that goldilocks had made. They went up stairs and saw her sleeping but when she woke up she had run off but baby bear said, “It’s alright I forgive you for the mess you made”. So  goldilocks and the bear family lived happily ever after. The End.


The moral of the story was to forgive people who does the wrong things and to not break into there stuff.